01/23/2008 - 19:06
Number 1
by Rashad McCants
I feel it coming. I sense the veins in my body thicken as I dream of power.
I feel it overpowering me.
I hear it In my dreams, these words of momentum.
That lead me forward.
As I stop and think, my eyes just blink. No thought or sound.
Just words profound.
And my eye lashes touch and my dream stops I was born with a touch from the hand of him.
And he knew that my life would demand some sin.
But with the command from him,
I am here for a reason.
That very reason
To be
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This is for the comment below ..
How is his freedom of self expression a sign that the system has failed...In 2008 when internet lingo has depleted normal use of american english or language for that matter. WTF!!! Are u a school teacher that failed thousands of kids? Who reads a poem and points out inperfections except someone lookin to blame everything on everyone else... Get on ur job. I mean please get on your job and stop hating on this young man. I hope my response totally violated Proper english grammer. lol Pitiful is right.
this poem
...is a testament to the failures of American school systems. Pitiful.